Songwriting Tip: Only One Thing

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One of the biggest challenges in writing a worship song is to narrow the focus.

Many times novice songwriters in particular have way too many unrelated ideas. A song bounces from God’s love, to his power, to his forgiveness, like a man in a shooting gallery at the fair – firing first at the row of ducks, then up at the targets, then over to the bears, then back at the ducks.

One way to focus is to state in one sentence what the song is about.

For example, you might say, “I want to write a song about how God is faithful to us when we are suffering.” Or “I want to write a song about how God is true to his promises.” Sometimes when I’ve floundered for hours on a song I’ve asked myself: “In one sentence, what do I want to say?” and it has brought clarity to the process.

After stating a clear theme sentence, make every verse and every line about that theme.

Go through your song line by line and ask yourself if each one is about the topic. Do any lines take the song in a different direction? Be ruthless. Don’t settle for filler lines or easy rhymes that don’t fit the theme.

Work hard to craft the best song you can for God’s glory.

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Don’t Eat The Chocolate Ones

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Ok, maybe the fake M-80 was not such a good idea illustration for Children’s Ministry.

How could I know the kids would take me so seriously? I thought they might get a little nervous, but how could I anticipate some would run out of the building, terrified, as if being chased by an enraged rhinoceros? Hey, we made a memory, didn’t we? And that was part of what Celebration was all about – making memories as families, singles and churches from all over came together for 3 days of worship, teaching and fun.

The second evening the three hundred 4th through 6th graders came back, excited for another night of games, worship, teaching and skits. The theme of the evening was temptation. My goal: teach that when the devil tempts us, he shows the bait and hides the hook. He doesn’t come prancing in wearing red tights with a pitchfork.

So that’s what we began with – a guy wearing red tights, horns and a cape, gliding around the room, hunched over, saying in an Elizabethan English accent, “May I tempt you? May I interest you in some…evil?”

The kids howled. The guy was brilliant. Snidely Whiplash-like, he’d occasionally let fly a sinister, “Nya-ah-ah-ah-ahhhhhhh!” then slither up to the next person to try to tempt them.

Point made. “The devil doesn’t tempt us like this, does he kids? No, what does he do?”

“He shows the bait and hides the hook.”

“Alright boys and girls, we’re going to have a little snack right now.” Applause. “I have to go do something in the other room, but Mr. H will be in charge of snacks.”

Out came trays laden with mostly golden brown cookies, but on every tray a few chocolate ones.

Mr. H said, “Boys and girls, let me warn you, you shouldn’t eat the chocolate cookies.”

Perfect. I came back in for Temptation Part 2. Mr. H had warned the kids NOT to eat the chocolate cookies – and for good reason. I’d had them baked with laundry detergent in them. I figured when the trays came back to the stage, they’d have only chocolate cookies on them, since the kids would heed Mr. H. Then I’d try to tempt one or two of the boys to eat one, saying, “Look how good it looks. Doesn’t it smell delicious?”

But something wasn’t right. When the trays came back to the stage, there were no chocolate cookies on them. I began to get that vague “lawsuit” feeling again.

“Hey kids!” I yelled. “Did anybody eat the chocolate cookies?” Dozens of hands shot up in the air.

“You ate those? Do you know what was in them?”

“YEAH!” They yelled in chorus. “SOAP!”

The “LAWSUIT” sign was flashing again.

There went my illustration. I couldn’t tempt them to eat the chocolate cookies – they’d snarfed them down quicker than I would be able to say, “You don’t have to fire me, I’ll resign. Why didn’t they listen to Mr. H?

Now I knew what Paul was talking about when he said he never would have coveted till the Law said, “Do not covet.”

Fortunately, there was no harm done, no lawsuits, and only a couple kids got stomach aches later that night. Hopefully it taught them not to neglect grown-ups warnings. All was well. And we still had pickled pigs feet to eat the following night…

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Music Review: “Watch the Rising Day” and “The Medicine”

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Watch the Rising Day is the latest album from Matthew Smith. Matthew is a singer-songwriter who writes songs largely based on centuries old hymns, and is also a founding member of “Indelible Grace”. According to the Smith, his latest album:

…explores the tension of living in that brokenness [of a fallen world] while awaiting the day when Earth and Heaven will meet and be made new.

I recently got my hands on Matthew’s latest album and had a chance to sit down and listen to it. Here’s a quick review:

Lyrics:

This album is very strong lyrically. Because Matthew bases most of his songs on hymns, the lyrics are rich and thoroughly biblical. The beauty of the lyrics is that they are very poetic and yet still full of sound doctrine. As a songwriter, I know how difficult that is to accomplish. If you buy this album, you will benefit from the deep, biblical lyrics.

Lyrics Rating: 7.75

Music:

The music for this album is pretty good. Unfortunately, I didn’t walk away from the album with any particular melodies running through my head, which is one way I gauge the creativity and catchiness of the music and melodies. But, the music isn’t bad either.

Music Rating: 6

Recommendation:

This album is worth buying, particularly if you enjoy old hymns redone. You can pre-order the album here (if you pre-order you immediately get to download it as well). Enter the coupon code “BLAZING” for 25% off the album.

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I’ve also been listening to John Mark McMillan’s latest album, The Medicine. Here’s my take:

Lyrics:

I’m not sure how I feel about the lyrics for this album. Some of the songs have really gripping, poetic phrases to describe our relationship with God. For example, in the song “Death In His Grave”, he says:

So three days in darkness slept
The Morning Sun of righteousness
But rose to shame the throes of death
And over turn his rule

That’s a really cool way of talking about the death and resurrection of Christ. But then you also have phrases like:

Peel back the veil of time
And let us see You with our naked eyes
We just wanna’ love you
We just wanna’ love you

That sounds cool, but I’m not really sure what it means. We’ll see Jesus with our eyes in heaven, but we’ll never see the Father with our naked eyes. So I’m not sure what he means by this phrase. If you buy the album, listen with discernment.

Lyrics Rating: 5

Music:

This album has a really cool feel. It has a raw, under produced, folk-rock feel that I really like. Personally, I think a lot of Christian music sounds very similar, and is actually a bit boring. The Medicine does not feel like a standard CCM album.

John Mark McMillan also came up with some really good melodic hooks that have stuck with me for several weeks now. He knows how to write a song.

Music Rating: 8

Recommendation:

Buy the album, even if it’s just for the music. You’ll enjoy it. You can buy it here.